From 978c8c10f734666260132143b14ed57201d9e201 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Robert Alessi <alessi@robertalessi.net>
Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 08:00:59 +0200
Subject: a correction

---
 ekdosis.dtx | 40 +++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

(limited to 'ekdosis.dtx')

diff --git a/ekdosis.dtx b/ekdosis.dtx
index d08b4a3..07fc12e 100644
--- a/ekdosis.dtx
+++ b/ekdosis.dtx
@@ -1752,13 +1752,13 @@ yesterday.
 \begin{minted}[linenos=false]{latex}
 As I was walking home through Times Square, I saw my friend
 \app{
-  \lem[wit={A,B}, alt={Peter\---yesterday}]{Peter at the
+  \lem[wit={A,B}, alt={Peter\---Street}]{Peter at the
     \app{
       \lem[wit=A, alt=station]{station}
       \rdg[wit=B, alt=bookstore]{bookstore}
     }
-    yesterday}
-  \rdg[wit=C, alt={John this evening}]{John this evening}
+    on 42nd Street}
+  \rdg[wit=C, alt={John on Broadway}]{John on Broadway}
 }.
 \end{minted}
 % \iffalse
@@ -1774,12 +1774,12 @@ As I was walking home through Times Square, I saw my friend
 %   \begin{specimen}
 %    As I was walking home through Times Square, I saw my friend
 %    \app{
-%      \lem[wit={pjA,pjB}, alt={Peter\---yesterday}]{Peter at the
+%      \lem[wit={pjA,pjB}, alt={Peter\---Street}]{Peter at the
 %        \app{
 %          \lem[wit=pjA, alt=station]{station}
 %          \rdg[wit=pjB, alt=bookstore]{bookstore}}
-%        yesterday}
-%      \rdg[wit=pjC, alt={John this evening}]{John this evening}}.
+%        on 42nd Street}
+%      \rdg[wit=pjC, alt={John on Broadway}]{John on Broadway}}.
 %   \end{specimen}
 % \end{alignment}
 %
@@ -1796,8 +1796,8 @@ friend
   <app>
     <lem wit="#A">station</lem>
     <rdg wit="#B">bookstore</rdg>
-  </app>yesterday</lem>
-  <rdg wit="#C">John this evening</rdg>
+  </app>on 42nd Street</lem>
+  <rdg wit="#C">John on Broadway</rdg>
 </app>.</p>
 \end{minted}
 % \iffalse
@@ -1829,12 +1829,12 @@ friend
 As I was walking home through Times Square, I saw my friend
 \app{
   \rdgGrp[type=subvariation]{
-    \lem[wit=A, alt={Peter\---yesterday}]{Peter at the station
-      yesterday}
+    \lem[wit=A, alt={Peter\---Street}]{Peter at the station
+      on 42nd Street}
     \rdg[wit=B, alt={bookstore \emph{pro} station}]{Peter at the
-      bookstore yesterday}
+      bookstore on 42nd Street}
   }
-  \rdg[wit=C]{John this evening}
+  \rdg[wit=C]{John on Broadway}
 }.
 \end{minted}
 % \iffalse
@@ -1851,12 +1851,12 @@ As I was walking home through Times Square, I saw my friend
 % As I was walking home through Times Square, I saw my friend
 % \app{
 %   \rdgGrp[type=subvariation]{
-%     \lem[wit=pjA, alt={Peter\---yesterday}]{Peter at the station
-%       yesterday}
+%     \lem[wit=pjA, alt={Peter\---Street}]{Peter at the station
+%       on 42nd Street}
 %     \rdg[wit=pjB, alt={bookstore \emph{pro} station}]{Peter at the
-%       bookstore yesterday}
+%       bookstore on 42nd Street}
 %   }
-%   \rdg[wit=pjC]{John this evening}
+%   \rdg[wit=pjC]{John on Broadway}
 % }.
 %   \end{specimen}
 % \end{alignment}
@@ -1871,10 +1871,12 @@ As I was walking home through Times Square, I saw my friend
 friend 
 <app>
   <rdgGrp type="subvariation">
-    <lem wit="#A">Peter at the station yesterday</lem>
-    <rdg wit="#B">Peter at the bookstore yesterday</rdg>
+    <lem wit="#A">Peter at the station on 42nd
+    Street</lem>
+    <rdg wit="#B">Peter at the bookstore on 42nd
+    Street</rdg>
   </rdgGrp>
-  <rdg wit="#C">John this evening</rdg>
+  <rdg wit="#C">John on Broadway</rdg>
 </app>.</p>
 \end{minted}
 % \iffalse
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