1 files changed, 14 insertions, 15 deletions
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 5993557..b16c2a7 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -19,23 +19,22 @@ Privacy Settings
 ----------------
 It also provides a “Privacy settings” section: if `enable_privacy` is
 set to `true`, then the wired internet interface that may or may not
-be connected to the internet can have its MAC address spoofed at
+be connected to the internet will have its MAC address spoofed at
 startup. (The wireless interfaces must also be spoofed, but this can
-be handled by wpa_supplicant.)  Additionally, x200-my will delete
+be handled by wpa_supplicant: see below.)  Additionally, x200-my will
-`/etc/dhcpcd.duid`, which will make `dhcpcd` generate a new DUID-LLT
+delete `/etc/dhcpcd.duid`, which will make `dhcpcd` generate a new
-based file with an updated timestamp and the link-layer address of the
+DUID-LLT based file with an updated timestamp and the spoofed
-network interface that is connected to the DHCP device at the time
+link-layer address of the network interface that is connected to the
-that the DUID is generated.
+DHCP device at the time that the DUID is generated.
 Backup
 ------
 Finally x200-my has the ability to backup essential files or
-directories—for instance a backup disk mounted inside the dock.  Of
+directories—for instance to a backup disk mounted inside the dock.  Of
-course, the backup process is triggered on certain conditions
+course, the backup process is triggered on certain conditions only:
-only:
-1. The option must be enabled in the `/etc/conf.d/x200-my` file
+1. The option must be enabled in the `/etc/conf.d/x200-my` file.
-2. The disk must be mounted
+2. The disk must be mounted.
 3. An (empty) `dobackup` file must be present in the backup directory.
 Then, once these conditions are met, the backup process is triggered
@@ -65,10 +64,10 @@ Foundation, Inc., 51 Franklin Street, Fifth Floor, Boston, MA
 Installation
 ============
-1. Clone this repository locally
+1. Clone this repository locally.
-2. Do `makepkg`
+2. Do `makepkg`.
-3. Install the generated x200-my package as root with `pacman -U`
+3. Install the generated x200-my package as root with `pacman -U`.
-4. Edit `/etc/conf.d/x200-my`
+4. Edit `/etc/conf.d/x200-my`.
 Use and recommended configuration
 ---------------------------------

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 5993557..b16c2a7 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md
@@ -19,23 +19,22 @@ Privacy Settings
19	----------------	19	----------------
20	It also provides a “Privacy settings” section: if `enable_privacy` is	20	It also provides a “Privacy settings” section: if `enable_privacy` is
21	set to `true`, then the wired internet interface that may or may not	21	set to `true`, then the wired internet interface that may or may not
22	be connected to the internet can have its MAC address spoofed at	22	be connected to the internet will have its MAC address spoofed at
23	startup. (The wireless interfaces must also be spoofed, but this can	23	startup. (The wireless interfaces must also be spoofed, but this can
24	be handled by wpa_supplicant.) Additionally, x200-my will delete	24	be handled by wpa_supplicant: see below.) Additionally, x200-my will
25	`/etc/dhcpcd.duid`, which will make `dhcpcd` generate a new DUID-LLT	25	delete `/etc/dhcpcd.duid`, which will make `dhcpcd` generate a new
26	based file with an updated timestamp and the link-layer address of the	26	DUID-LLT based file with an updated timestamp and the spoofed
27	network interface that is connected to the DHCP device at the time	27	link-layer address of the network interface that is connected to the
28	that the DUID is generated.	28	DHCP device at the time that the DUID is generated.
29		29
30	Backup	30	Backup
31	------	31	------
32	Finally x200-my has the ability to backup essential files or	32	Finally x200-my has the ability to backup essential files or
33	directories—for instance a backup disk mounted inside the dock. Of	33	directories—for instance to a backup disk mounted inside the dock. Of
34	course, the backup process is triggered on certain conditions	34	course, the backup process is triggered on certain conditions only:
35	only:
36		35
37	1. The option must be enabled in the `/etc/conf.d/x200-my` file	36	1. The option must be enabled in the `/etc/conf.d/x200-my` file.
38	2. The disk must be mounted	37	2. The disk must be mounted.
39	3. An (empty) `dobackup` file must be present in the backup directory.	38	3. An (empty) `dobackup` file must be present in the backup directory.
40		39
41	Then, once these conditions are met, the backup process is triggered	40	Then, once these conditions are met, the backup process is triggered
@@ -65,10 +64,10 @@ Foundation, Inc., 51 Franklin Street, Fifth Floor, Boston, MA
65		64
66	Installation	65	Installation
67	============	66	============
68	1. Clone this repository locally	67	1. Clone this repository locally.
69	2. Do `makepkg`	68	2. Do `makepkg`.
70	3. Install the generated x200-my package as root with `pacman -U`	69	3. Install the generated x200-my package as root with `pacman -U`.
71	4. Edit `/etc/conf.d/x200-my`	70	4. Edit `/etc/conf.d/x200-my`.
72		71
73	Use and recommended configuration	72	Use and recommended configuration
74	---------------------------------	73	---------------------------------